Workin' for a livin'

All of these news posts are being preserved on the blog fyi. And if you aren't following the twitter or fb page you are missin out!
Have I updated the site yet? HECK NO! I had a really busy week of work so while I DID work on the comic, extra things like site niceness did not get done. But. hey! Comic! That is good, really good considering my track record ;P
Page 3 is hurting my face because I am having to draw old architecture from the old pages. Old stuff is old. BAH! But the plus side is that I am remembering not only do I need to add more citizens and what not I can reuse dauls I drew before, dauls that fans seemed to like. I will talk about that more in page 3's blog though...
As far as this page goes I rewrote the end of it conisderably at the last minute and you know I'm still not sure I'm pleased. I like the content but I want Uber's interruptions to show more that he is on the same page as Verite and doesn't want Verite to have to go into a painful topic so much.
If I ever redid any of Ragtime I would elongate the end. I can't even go into all the problems with the rushed nature of the end of Poppette's Story. Maybe someday I will.
This is another page that the layout has changed alot from the original.  These pages were to all be done outside on the steps but it seemed too static to me and the conversations taking place seemed too long to be taking place right before Whisp took off for her journey. At first I tried to change the dialogue but it didn't work, in the end a simple change of venue fixed it. They have the ceremony for Whip announcing her plans to leave, then in the privacy of the castle they go to hammer out the details. Whisp lives near the castle on the grounds so it's very plausible she's either packing or in the castle saying goodbyes while Verite and Uber discuss things in Verite's study. There are things going on the in the last panel that aren't significant here but hopefully people will pick up on. I thought about explaining it but that's no fun. They may not be important here but in a future story they will be, but that could be said for a number of things I throw in here and there.
Also RAAWEH IS COMING IN SOON! I <3 Raaweh. More on that on the page 4 blog ;)